Sam I would like section 3 on Estimation to have reviewed. Purvasha I would like 4.1, 4.2 and 4.3 to be reviewed. That is, from page 8 to 11. Maria I am interested in getting comments about part 3, specifically: 3, 3.1, 3.2, 3.2.1, and 3.2.2. Thanks! Beau I would like the Introduction to be reviewed for this round. Peter I'd like to have sections 2 and 3 reviewed. The introduction, such as it is, may give some background. Typewriter text indicates comments to myself. Shannon Please review section 4. Jisu I would like my Section 3 to be reviewed. I don't expect reviewers to read statement of lemmas or propositions: I am just trying to see if paragraphs between lemmas or propositions are readable and conveying brief ideas, without understanding detailed statement of lemmas/propositions. Amanda I would like to submit Section 5.3, 5.4 and 6 for peer review. I'd specifically like feedback about whether I've described the simulations and procedures in section 5.3 and 5.4 well enough that someone could replicate them, and that the conclusion makes sense if read by itself. Thanks! Francesca I want the literature section to be reviewed. Thanks! Brendan I would like comments on sections 4 and 5 (results and discussions). These are almost certainly shorter than they should be so I would appreciate comments on what I should expand on. Refer to section 3 (methodology) as necessary. Josue I would appreciate feedback on pages 1-4. I revised them and applied more consistent formatting. I'm still working on the results section. Taylor The introduction and data section Jining I'd like to submit section 3 for this peer review cycle. Lee Section 4: SPEW. This is a first draft so anything that could make it clearer to understand would help ---