Final Draft Comments Team A.
Grade: 98/100. Great work!

Introduction: 20/20. 

Very strong. Clear presentation of question and motivation coupled
with appropriate acknowledgment of existing work on the topic.

Methods: 18/20. 

Strong. This is a minor complaint, but you don't mention any of the
post-survey processing until the Results section, where you describe
it in detail.

In addition, something odd that was also in your draft (i.e. that I'm
not taking off for here, since I didn't catch it when I read your
draft): if you expect a response rate of "between 20% to 30%", and you
sample ~1100 students, then you expect between 220 and 330 responses,
which is fewer than the 370 you seem to have calculated as your
desired number of responses. In any event, it's good that in the end
you ended up getting a mostly adequate number of responses.

Results: 20/20. 

Very strong.

Discussion: 20/20. 

Very strong; I'll especially highlight that the presentation of
occasionally sensitive issues was tasteful and even-handed throughout.

References: 10/10. 

Appendices: 10/10.