Feedback - Team B

The draft of the project report is very strong and generally adheres
to the guidelines laid out for the report. Some comments:

- Good introduction, bringing in outside information to illuminate the
  research motivation. This is an exceedingly minor point, but I'd be
  a little hesitant to cite an article from a student-run university
  daily, especially when the information is not specific to that
  university and can probably be obtained from a more classically
  reputable source if you dig a bit.

- Good observation that if you had used Facebook as your sole means of
  contacting students, you might be covering a population with
  materially different behavior with regard to the research
  question. I think using Facebook as a secondary means or to
  recontact should be fine.

- So far, as there were no skipped questions among your 31 responses,
  you've been able to avoid settling the issue of what constitutes a
  nonresponse. It's a little optimistic to presume that this will hold
  for all 362 responses you (hope to) get, so you'll probably have to
  settle on some threshold number of unanswered questions. Be sure to
  be clear about this in your final writeup.

- I'd be curious to see how the responses to the copyright ethics
  questions vary according to school affiliation or stated political
  affiliation, e.g. if Tepper students have a markedly different take
  on intellectual property ethics than, say, H&SS students.

- At times, the tone of the writing is a bit informal ("lost big in
  court like Napster") or lacking in the objectivity/detachment that
  scientific writing should embody.

MV

ADDITIONAL COMMENTS BY BJ:

* Mike's comments above are great and I hope you pay close attention
  to them as you complete the project andwrite your final paper.

* Please convert all footnoted/MLA style references to inline
  parenthetical references in the text, using APA style discussed in
  clas.

* Also add an APA style list of references at the end of your paper.

* please include copies of your contact and recontact emails to survey
  respondents in an appx of final paper

* please also include copy of your informed consent paragraph(s) in
  appx of final paper.