TEAM H

Section 1: Introduction                             18/20

  [great; need to adhere better to APA style for references to literature]

  Research Question and Motivation

  Citations to literature on this topic

  Quick summary of main results from Section 4

Section 2: Methods                                  20/20

  Target population, frame, sample design/methods, sample size

  Number of respondents contacted, number of respondents, other
  nonresponse/refusal information

  A few questions from your questionnaire (full questionnaire, contact
  letter(s), informed consent statement, etc, in appendices)

  Post-survey processing

  Other relevant information from the body of your progress report
  talk

Section 3: Results                                  15/20

  [variety of suitable methods]

  [hard to follow everything without pulling some material from the
  appendices into the main report (especially the subsampling
  experiments)]

  [need to think abotu the fact that most results "should be"
  significant when the sample size is large (as large as the
  population) -- also think aobut whether testing even makes sense at
  the population level...]

  [a clearer discussion of biases with indeed.com, correctly
  identifying jobs, etc., in one place, would help a lot]

  (may or may not be longer than Section 2!)

  Restate research question(s), show statistical analyses, discuss how
  they answer each research question (gory stat details in another
  appendix?)

Section 4: Discussion                               20/20

  Overall discussion of research questions, how well survey answered
  them

  Any surprising, or expected, results

  Strengths and weaknesses of your survey; recommendations for future

  Take-home message(s)

List of References                                  10/10

Appendices                                          5/10

[*great* detail but need better subsection heads, as well as some
additional text, to guide reader about what is there]

TOTAL                                               /100

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