Section 1: Introduction                             10/20

  Research Question and Motivation

  Citations to literature on this topic

  Quick summary of main results from Section 4

  * good motivtion
  * missing citations
  * no section titles - where does each thing start and stop??
  * what is the main research question?


Section 2: Methods                                  10/20

  Target population, frame, sample design/methods, sample size

  Number of respondents contacted, number of respondents, other
  nonresponse/refusal information

  A few questions from your questionnaire (full questionnaire, contact
  letter(s), informed consent statement, etc, in appendices)

  Post-survey processing

  Other relevant information from the body of your progress report
  talk

  * no sample questions
  * no information about post-survey processing
  * no information about how the survey was conducted (www site?
    embeded in email? etc.), how a high response rate was achieved, 
    difficulties or successes in the process, etc.
 
Section 3: Results                                  10/20

  (may or may not be longer than Section 2!)

  Restate research question(s), show statistical analyses, discuss how
  they answer each research question (gory stat details in another
  appendix?)

  * no restatement of the research question(s) 
  * many descriptives of the sample, no inferences about the
    population
  * no organization to help reader see what the main lessons or
    results of the survey were

  * clearly there is lots of interesting information here, but it is
    not organized in a way that makes it easy for the reader to see
    what the main themes are, or what the connections are between
    different questions, etc.

Section 4: Discussion                               15/20

  Overall discussion of research questions, how well survey answered
  them

  Any surprising, or expected, results

  Strengths and weaknesses of your survey; recommendations for future

  Take-home message(s)

  * beginning of a good discussion but most of the above elements
    still missing!


List of References                                  5/10

Appendices                                          0/10

TOTAL                                               50/100

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* I was expecting most of Sections 1 and 2, and the list of
  references, would be complete

  - using material from your project proposal

  - using material from your progress report ppt

* I was expecting many holes in the rest of the paper, depending on
  work you haven't completed yet.

  - For each hole, I was looking for a paragraph detailing what you
    plan to do to fill the hole (put the paragraph in bold or italic,
    or box it or something so I know it is "plans" and not part of the
    actual paper text).

  - I considered your *plans* in sections 3, 4 and the appendices, not
    what you've *done* in these sections.  So not having many analyses
    yet wasn't a problem, as long as you gave me a well-thought-out
    set of plans for what you will do in the last couple weeks of the
    semester.

* I also considered organization & content (and plans, if you don't
    have content for some parts yet!)

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