Please find attached:

(1) A marked up copy of your draft paper

(2) A scoring sheet that follows the elements outlined in lecture 20,
week 10, for the draft.

I will ***NOT*** record these draft paper scores in the gradebook.
Instead, I will evaluate your final draft using the same scoring
sheet, and paying attention to changes, edits, improvements, reactions
to my edits, additional information, etc, that you have added in the
final draft.  I would expect to be able to give scores at least as
high, and hopefully higher, on the final draft as on the rough draft
paper.

see you in class,

-BJ